In my dream

by emo angel   Jun 17, 2007


In my dream you loved me.
In my dream you cared and held me.
In my dream I had everything I wanted.
And everything I want is you.
I had you.
But Then I woke up.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    I was really getting into it and then when I read the last part I was kinda going 'aw sad' but that's what makes it so effective. The repetition of "In my dream" goes well with this piece and then the end was well done. Though short-which is good for this piece-it's quite an effective write. Nice one.
    ~Faith-less

  • 17 years ago

    by Ryan

    Short but good

  • 17 years ago

    by Jabeen Hussain

    Wow..short but good..very good..bye xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Kyle

    Wow i really like this poem, good job!!

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