Wow i really like this poem, good job!!

Wow..short but good..very good..bye xx

Short but good

I was really getting into it and then when I read the last part I was kinda going 'aw sad' but that's what makes it so effective. The repetition of "In my dream" goes well with this piece and then the end was well done. Though short-which is good for this piece-it's quite an effective write. Nice one.
~Faith-less