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by Ingrid   Jun 17, 2007


As I walked along the windy shore
I felt your presence drawing near to me
It thrilled me to the core

A sense of love and warmth entered
and made it's way through my spine

Soon your spirit took complete control of me
made me feel loved and cherished and divine

How strange to share these feelings with a ghost
but maybe that's just it: the things we can't have
are the things we want most

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  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Well written Ingrid a rather melancholy poem, and so true as well sometimes it seems the harder we try the more difficult it is to get what we want

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    I love how your poem started off describing a relationship and a person that made you feel a certain way than you twisted it to be a ghost or spirit and you were right to say what we desire is not what we can have
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    Ingrid, your words are very true in every syllable you've put on. And I am glad that you have decided to take us through a divine journey of your most beautiful works. :) And I thank you for your kind comment on our collab, much appreciated and I give the compliments back, sevenfold. :)

    Take care!

    Hugs,

    Bri~

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Very strong poem and beautifully well written. Great Job ingrid. You are a good writer, you should get your poems published and i will be the first one to buy them. Take care.

    -The little one...

  • 17 years ago

    by Becca

    This was great. Beautiful. You are a great writer. Keep it up.

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