Naw this was so sweet and affectionate. it was so cute and the ending was like whoa! i loved this, i bet whoever you directed this will be very speechless and feel an urge of love.

5/5 David

This is a great poem!!...the ending was especially good:D
loved it!!
hope to read more soon
gr8 write
breex

A great poem.. well done

I really loved this poem. I could feel the emotion. Well Penned! GREAT JOB!

I love the last line!

the things we can't have
are the things we want most

A unique kind of poem, i love it...and i guess you are right "but maybe that's just it: the things we can't have
are the things we want most "

This was great. Beautiful. You are a great writer. Keep it up.

Very strong poem and beautifully well written. Great Job ingrid. You are a good writer, you should get your poems published and i will be the first one to buy them. Take care.

-The little one...

Ingrid, your words are very true in every syllable you've put on. And I am glad that you have decided to take us through a divine journey of your most beautiful works. :) And I thank you for your kind comment on our collab, much appreciated and I give the compliments back, sevenfold. :)

Take care!

Hugs,

Bri~

I love how your poem started off describing a relationship and a person that made you feel a certain way than you twisted it to be a ghost or spirit and you were right to say what we desire is not what we can have
5/5

Well written Ingrid a rather melancholy poem, and so true as well sometimes it seems the harder we try the more difficult it is to get what we want

Grant