Great job hunn! another great poem : ) you are really talented!
<3 tabi

Nice poem...i love to read it ^_^ 5/5

Really good. 5/5

amandaxx.

Katy,

I think you hit on a very "real" topic here, and you wrote about it very well. Made me stop and think about everything we face daily in our lives ~ no matter our age, we all do face our own personal war. Great job!

Connie

I like this poem very much... its so meaningful and true, you are a great poet... x x x

NICE
how do you come up with this stuff?

Wow, really good, seriously. Great thought, great concept, love the way you write
"We pass many people on the street,
Not even to give them a thought,
Never to see them again,
Never to pass them again"..

Amazing! I wish I would have thought of it :P

SemberArdens Obsession

Very moralistic. You write of ignorances that many do not even consider that they have, and your understanding of it is beautiful. Very well done. xx

Great poem with a great message, well done 5/5
imi
xxx

See, i write rhyming poems, cause i can never keep a flow in a non rhythmic poem...
i think ur either born with it or not...
i guess u are though..
i liked the repitition of the first letter in both the second and 4rth stanza..(whether its intentional or not...)
one thing though...if i were u...i wouldnt put commas on the end of each line....it makes the reader pause...and u dont want many pauses...ud ruin the flow....
anyways..a 5/5 from moi....

I would say that you have put into words, what humans feel, day in and day out. well done.

AWESOME POEM!!
LOVE IT!!

It's nice to read from from someone who write's from the heart. you are very real in your words