Wow,thats really good. I like how you wrote it[1st person]
excellent:)

Really good poem. A really unique subject and true to your view on the world. Good job. :)

Wow.. incredible.. words hav such power..
well done! 5/5
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Hmm.. I'm not sure I understand. It's a very powerful piece, don't get me wrong, but I don't get it. Is it abortion? That's the feeling I got, but I don't know much about procedures like that so it was hard to tell. Anyhow, your words have some kind of energy to them. It's nice. Keep writing, because I look forward to reading more!

This is an awesome poem and i wish the whole world could so those who think about doing that horrible thing would see the error of their ways. U R reeeally good!!

Wow that was amazing, and a whole different perspective, i loved it. great write, great job.

I loved the perspective.
very sad but beautifully written.

good work.

Oh it was really my favourite..I liked the talking things some times..and it was so meaningful inside when you start to read it
So good work
Beatifully penned,
Laura

Very beautiful with the right word choice and great flow. You have written it very well and the imagery is awesome in this piece. It reflects your creativity. 5/5 all the way

That was an awsome write youngman, it flowed so well.... It brought smile to my face as I read just wondering if this was our son's first thoughts when he arrived in this world. May your heart always be filled with peace and joy each and everyday youngman.

sadaddy

Beautiful poem.
Great word choice and imagery.
Beautiful piece of writing.
Loved reading it.
Take care

This poem is strange but in a good way. It is very unique and topic is totally original. Ending is great and you wrote this unusual piece excellently. 5/5

Unique......nice poem your idea was so unique

This is a very neat poem i liked it very much...

Great poem, dude. Inspirasional bgt niy!!!

Loved it great poem! 5/5

Wow i never read a poem on that topic,its very good!