You Deserve Better

I like the way you keep the poem true to its meaning. you never lose the real reason you write them in the first place, and I agree with Mandy it reminds me of the same song :)

I like the way a guy can be so deep and can write poetry like this. Most of the guys I know would be embarrassed to post something like this. All I can say is YOU ROK DUDE!!! lol. 5/5

I like this poem :]

its not a really long poem

yet it portrays your emotions really well

and flows pretty good too :]

keep it up