Comments : You Deserve Better

  • 17 years ago

    by miss insecurity

    I like this poem :]

    its not a really long poem

    yet it portrays your emotions really well

    and flows pretty good too :]

    keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by oddi tea

    I like the way a guy can be so deep and can write poetry like this. Most of the guys I know would be embarrassed to post something like this. All I can say is YOU ROK DUDE!!! lol. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jamie Lorraine

    I like the way you keep the poem true to its meaning. you never lose the real reason you write them in the first place, and I agree with Mandy it reminds me of the same song :)