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I agree with EndOfTheBeginning anf Nazeer. Pheniminal poem. *wink*

I felt off. like ur didnt put detail, emotion, haunted, lost in his mind. and u had a small miss spelling. "starts" not stars . well rather then that. it was nicly done. just b4 he dies he would say her name and fade away. nicely done 4/5

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

OK! now THIS i like

*He starts to ponder...
am I going to die?
will I ever be found?..*

I love your word choice for PONDER! i lovee that word.! C-= 5outa5
**bri