by skynerraw Jun 17, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Broken hearted, feeling betrayed |
by Mo
Sounds like you've got a lot of pent up feelings that need to get out. This is a good way to start letting them out. If you have no one to talk to - write. Just let it all come flowing out and help you feel better. If you cant talk to someone, maybe write to them - its easier. Hope things get better at home and hope you learn to realise sometimes things happen and they're not anyone's fault at all. Espeically not yours. |
by CHOKE
Everyone has their different opinions of what a great poem is, and well this is my opinion of one. i don't think it deserves anything less than a 5. great job love. |
by Brittini
Great emotion, really loved the way they were expressed, wording great seemed bumpy to me in spots but thats me over all really good! 5/5 |
Nicely written, good vocab, great rhyme, deep, full of emotion, a definite 5/5 |
Wow. |