Then of your pain, and loses of the past
The horrid feelings that you thought wouldn't last

I loved that part...It had a lot of emotion in this poem...I really liked it...The flow was pretty good...Your a really good poet...And your so young...Overall 5/5....

Wow.
thats a really good poem i like how you showed all of that emotion.. I really like the format of it also all together just agreat poem keep it up.
5/5

Nicely written, good vocab, great rhyme, deep, full of emotion, a definite 5/5

Great emotion, really loved the way they were expressed, wording great seemed bumpy to me in spots but thats me over all really good! 5/5

Everyone has their different opinions of what a great poem is, and well this is my opinion of one. i don't think it deserves anything less than a 5. great job love.

Sounds like you've got a lot of pent up feelings that need to get out. This is a good way to start letting them out. If you have no one to talk to - write. Just let it all come flowing out and help you feel better. If you cant talk to someone, maybe write to them - its easier. Hope things get better at home and hope you learn to realise sometimes things happen and they're not anyone's fault at all. Espeically not yours.

Mo
xx