Does He Still Love Me?

by Serene Raindropz   Jun 18, 2007


Does he still love me?
Does he still care?
He doesn't even know i'm there.
Our love once shined bright as the sun,
But it's fading like the stars in the night sky.
I love him, but it's not as strong as it used to be.
Can we rekindel our love?
Or let it deteriorate like a cancer patient?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Aw it's a great poem, very emotion. I wish you made it longer :) I wish my ex feels the same way as you..

    Anyway flow was smooth, well done.

    You have one mistake in your poem xD
    Can we rekindel (are) love?
    It should be 'our' :)

    Our love once shined bright as the sun,
    But it's fading like the stars in the night sky.
    ^^I really adore those two lines.

    Keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cookiiee

    I love this poem! plz keep it up...