by ASPHYXIATED Jun 18, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
family
Once a year your day would come, |
by Lisa
I like this one,its very nicely written |
I agree with Tracy, amazing flow. |
Excellent poem, good flow wonderful wording and you expressed your inner feelings very well , great job on this piece, it was very well written and full of sad feeling, I know been there, good work , your friend Tracy dean 5/5 |