Excellent poem, good flow wonderful wording and you expressed your inner feelings very well , great job on this piece, it was very well written and full of sad feeling, I know been there, good work , your friend Tracy dean 5/5

I agree with Tracy, amazing flow.
Odd...I don't argue with people often. =]
Lol, well it was amazing, darling.
Keep it up! I'm commenting on all your poems! I don't remember where I left off! Lol! I'll find it sooner or later!
ily xxxx
5/5
-Heater

I like this one,its very nicely written
keep it up!
-Lisa