by lost Jun 18, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
As I stand before the ash covered gates to hell |
Oh my goodness! I love this poem so much! It really tells just how you're feeling. Wow! And I love the fact that it doesn't rhyme, most of mine do, but I find that if it rhymes, the words are somehow forced, but when you freestyle it, it flows soo much better! Any way, you get 5/5 cause I really love it! Thank you for writing this, it makes my day better! |
by HaileyHelen
Wow thats really good!totally relate!5/5 |