The feeling
by Loved In Hell Jun 18, 2007
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When your eyes meet and you feel a jolt ofd electricity go through your body and even if the world was falling apart all around you. you could never turn away because your eyes have met and laocked. you feel your insides do backflips and whoever it is, they could give you the world or destroy it. all your life rests in their eyes and you could do nothing about it |
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17 years ago
by Cassandra
I agree with Robert, but none the less when writting a poem you get overwhelmed with emotion and excitment and you want your reader to feel that, and I definetly think you executed that very well.
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17 years ago
Ooh deep. And so true...I liked it, it was well written...
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17 years ago
by Robert
This was a short paragraph I am not sure if it was a true poenm in the sense on one as I know it but it was packed with emotion and thats good Plot121
