This was a short paragraph I am not sure if it was a true poenm in the sense on one as I know it but it was packed with emotion and thats good Plot121

Ooh deep. And so true...I liked it, it was well written...

I agree with Robert, but none the less when writting a poem you get overwhelmed with emotion and excitment and you want your reader to feel that, and I definetly think you executed that very well.