Lost
by Loved In Hell Jun 18, 2007
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Dreams of a long lost fantasy fill her mind if only to return to the time things were fresh and new to her innocent heart. Pain and deceit had taught her the cruelty of the world. Was she just in some sick nightmare and desperately needed to awake or was her past a lie? The truth is she missed what she used to hold onto the pain for hope for tomorrow why did that blood chilling voice haunt her sense of being at this time of her life what had happened to him he disappeared like a fading star just as the flame of passion slowly diminished a ghost haunted her a spirit of the past….why, why wont this leave her mind why must she live in a vast wasteland where nothing was allowed to grow |
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17 years ago
I loved it.
It was so amazing.
5/5 from me.
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17 years ago
by Michelle18
Hmmm....interesting...
not really a poem but definately something worth reading..i visualized it all.
amazing write! 5/5 -
17 years ago
by Nix
This is not a poem!!! Anyway this one is greatly written and wording is excellent. I like the atmosphere, well done 5/5
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17 years agoby Beautifully Nothing
When i first opened i was kind of like "oh crap". try to break it up a little. it was nicely written, but it would be better if it was broken up. keep it up <3
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17 years ago
by Lyndsy
I really liked it. I gave it a 4/5 though. The only reason for that is because I think it would flow a little better with some punctuation. Aside from that, it's so full of emotion and very deep.
