by CHOKE Jun 18, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
He held me in his arms, |
by Robert
The flow to this poem was real good at first then in the middle I think the started to go another way completely. Well it read kinda choppy from there. I like your use of some words and your explained yourself well but the flow was off just a tad bit Plot121 |
by skynerraw
Wow, that's really sad, I loved the topic, and the explanation, Your emotions come through loud and clear I really loved it~! 5.5! |
by Nikki
I really liked it =) |
This is good. |
by K3LSI3
Great poem.The emotions are expressed in a great way. |