Fathers Day

by bRiNgMeToLiFe   Jun 18, 2007


Full of joy
A time when we celebrate
T hose that effected our lives greatly
H ere on one day we come together to
E njoy our fathers &
R ejoice
S o today tell your

D ad how much you love him
A nd treasure him when
Y ou can.
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I got no clue. just thought of it. First acrostic ever done so please be nice:)
thanks
<3

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  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Good job its cool 5/5 as all yours
    cy

  • 17 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    For your first acrostic poem, I'd say it was really good : ) Very sweet too. Good job..

  • 17 years ago

    by unknown

    Good enough for the first acrostic poem.. ^^
    It's easy to read..
    But i think it's better if every first words have their own line. ^^
    Keep writing... ^^

  • 17 years ago

    by Alex Marlatt

    That was very sweet. I'm sure you father would love it. One change to make though is 'effected' should be 'affected'.

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