Hey Cindy, |
This poem was excellent. |
I LOVE THIS!!!! I love how you keep going back to the candle and the wind in most of the stanzas...i kept finding that i had to re-read upwards and thats obviously a god sign of true talent..great work on this piece!! Andrew |
by Rachel RTVW
Excellent job on this collab. Haunting and beautiful. |
Cindy, |
by chavii
Cindy , everytime i read a collab poem by you two i think this one must be best but every time you two prove me wrong and i'm glad for it. |
by debbylyn
Beautiful as always....you two write as one....so beautiful and romantic.....love it all....perfect rhyme and flow throughout! Love, Debbie |
by Cathy
Such a pretty poem Cindy! Loved it! |
by Lithium
Beautiful work guys, whenever you work together you come up with such fantasic pieces full of talent and warmth great job xox sam |
by Boy
It was such a great writing style. i loved your poem.. good work... i liked thes lines alot |
by moonlil
Oh wow! This poem is soooooooooooo beautiful and wonderful. |
by Hebe
A beautiful poem. |
by Chelsey
*tear*...I want to say so much Cindy, but I can't...this was absolutley breath taking and I am sure it was about your husband..I love how you are still in love and its so easy to write about for you! Thats so amazing and I enjoy reading your writes so much!!......I feel like this comment should be forever long but I'm speechless! I loved it! |
by Tara Kay
Hiya Cindy, another wonderful poem. This was a very good collab that i did enjoy reading, you are both very talented writers so this poem worked so so well. |
by Debbie
Ms. Cindy, |
by sarah
Wow! i reli liked dis poem, brilliant imagery! You can reli understand the emotions of love :) |
by Bryan
Im extremely sorry i have not read this until now, tis a good poem cindy, love the collabs that you do, we ought to do one someday! love the flow and sweet serenity with a hint of pain that i get from reading this, i give it a perfect 5/5 as always, please keep them coming!!! |
by Tiffany
Beautiful...I found myself wiping silent tears from my eyes...because in a lot of ways this poem reminded me of "The Notebook!" And that strong kind of love is very rare...it's so breathtaking u can't help but cry!!! Great job |
by Nee
You know what I love the most abt you & your poems? you've a collection of poems..in various categories! |
by Nee
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