Comments : Dancing On The Edge ( Collab )

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Hey Cindy,

    Once again reunited
    Forever our love will live
    Dancing on clouds from heaven
    My heart again to you I give

    Your magic always pull me out of web and make me join this wonderful world of poems. Writing with you is a feeling which only my heart knows and trust me...people out here are standing right behind me for getting there chance...but they have to KILL me for that.. :o))

    great write dear

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This poem was excellent.
    i am blown up with your talent.
    i just love the way you have written it.

    Scorching tears falling from my soul
    Burning my heart with your face
    Dancing on the edge for eternity
    Sending love's song into time and space.

    this stanza was excellent.
    best wishes
    and take care
    emmeline

  • 17 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    I LOVE THIS!!!! I love how you keep going back to the candle and the wind in most of the stanzas...i kept finding that i had to re-read upwards and thats obviously a god sign of true talent..great work on this piece!! Andrew

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Excellent job on this collab. Haunting and beautiful.

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Cindy,

    I see collab poems you do with End of Eternity quite often, and each one is done with such wonderful unity, that I can never say for sure which is yours and which is not. Thus making the piece in the entirety such a joy to read.

    Once again, you have pulled it off. Such a sad write, yet filled with hope.

    Flowed well and imagery gook

    Always,
    Jeannie

  • 17 years ago

    by chavii

    Cindy , everytime i read a collab poem by you two i think this one must be best but every time you two prove me wrong and i'm glad for it.
    The poem is like music playing notes of perfect love harmony,Each line is so beautiful and heartfelt even words couldn express.
    BRAVO !

    Take care
    chavii.

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Beautiful as always....you two write as one....so beautiful and romantic.....love it all....perfect rhyme and flow throughout! Love, Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by Cathy

    Such a pretty poem Cindy! Loved it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lithium

    Beautiful work guys, whenever you work together you come up with such fantasic pieces full of talent and warmth great job xox sam

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    It was such a great writing style. i loved your poem.. good work... i liked thes lines alot

    Once again reunited
    Forever our love will live
    Dancing on clouds from heaven
    My heart again to you I give

  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    Oh wow! This poem is soooooooooooo beautiful and wonderful.

    Breathing without you with me
    Living not without you near
    My heartbeats are now empty
    Waiting for angels to appear

    Love these lines..

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    A beautiful poem.
    Nice flow and great words.
    Like it a lot!

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    *tear*...I want to say so much Cindy, but I can't...this was absolutley breath taking and I am sure it was about your husband..I love how you are still in love and its so easy to write about for you! Thats so amazing and I enjoy reading your writes so much!!......I feel like this comment should be forever long but I'm speechless! I loved it!
    Chelsey

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Hiya Cindy, another wonderful poem. This was a very good collab that i did enjoy reading, you are both very talented writers so this poem worked so so well.
    love your friend, Tara-Kay

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    Ms. Cindy,

    Verily, this is such a stunning success for something written in collaboration with another exceptional poet. I always admire how both of you magically weave words into an extremely endearing work of art. I adored it.

    Lovely work, as always!

    Love,
    Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by sarah

    Wow! i reli liked dis poem, brilliant imagery! You can reli understand the emotions of love :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Im extremely sorry i have not read this until now, tis a good poem cindy, love the collabs that you do, we ought to do one someday! love the flow and sweet serenity with a hint of pain that i get from reading this, i give it a perfect 5/5 as always, please keep them coming!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tiffany

    Beautiful...I found myself wiping silent tears from my eyes...because in a lot of ways this poem reminded me of "The Notebook!" And that strong kind of love is very rare...it's so breathtaking u can't help but cry!!! Great job

  • 17 years ago

    by Nee

    You know what I love the most abt you & your poems? you've a collection of poems..in various categories!

    back to the poem..I love the compassion in this piece..very wonderful & creative...I love your romance poems so much..even our sad ones are gr8 too =)
    you're a wonderful writer & you deserve the best forever

    keep that Up
    Missed ya xxx
    NemO

  • 17 years ago

    by Nee

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