Dancing On The Edge (Collab)

Hey!!!
This poem was very well written.You two have done an excellent job!!!!!Each stanza was very well written.I'm blown away with your talent.You two work together, It makes the flow of the poem even better.Good job on this piece.You have expressed love very well.
Hope to see another poem of yours.
Take Care

Like what I've said on Ms. Cindy's account,

Verily, this is such a stunning success for something written in collaboration with another exceptional poet. I always admire how both of you magically weave words into an extremely endearing work of art. I adored it.

Lovely work, as always!

Love,
Debbie

Ohh...I loved this poem! Congratulations to you two, it was wondeful, I cant say more, I just loved every single word you used here.Very beautifully written, keep writing this way!5/5
Best wishes,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

Pst.Im back after a long time, so dont worry about commenting back, I still havent had the time to post new work.Take care!

Lovely penned within beautiful emotions you express here, and i find this stanza, just beautiful yet couldn't explain within words..

Cradle of desire dancing in flames
With angels of love hand in hand
Singing in your ears down below
Echo of my heart in promise land

have a good day,

best wishes, Bert.

That was really good poem!!!! xx