Fantasy

by xBrokenxAngelx   Jun 18, 2007


A mystical world
unlike others
keeps you away from others

the creatures there
are very rare
but now I am to share;

"If you tremble down to hell
where the shadows dwell
you will soon be greeted
or defeated
by a dark dust seated."

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  • 17 years ago

    by Richard Machado

    Not the immediate fill I got from your other poem, because it takes just a little time to dwell on what the character is trying to say. Very good indeed, the fruit of it is good but the word play is a little off at the end, and one of you lines should have 2 more syllables to help the flow. As for that, exellent work.

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