Don't necessarely approve of what they're doing in this poem but sometimes it's true that the person we're actually with is not really the one we should be with. why be stuck with someone that isn't working as much for you? hot topic...haha 5/5

Very well written ,and its like reading the situation I am going through right now.Stuck in a relationship I am not happy in and my heart is yearning for another who is also in a loveless relationship.

This was well written
I liked the way it told a story I could really visualize

This is amazing 5/5

I enjoyed you poem!

This poem is beautifully written
the gentle,soft rythym flowns enthusiastically and effortlessly
lovely structure too.
sarah .x.x