Hey there,
I'm felix13 as u can see. I am new to this site so if if u can give me any tips that would be great. I really love your poems but i do think that your imagery need some work. Message me and we can work on it if you want.
Btw, is the imogen a real person? I like poems that are based around reality but as i can see from above comments, it can cause problems lol!