Crackle, not

by Richard Machado   Jun 18, 2007


A crack,
A portal,
A rip in time,

Has ripped
Hour glass and
Honest emerald lime.

Neighbors scream to
Notice theyve
Not yet past:

A tapping;
A rumble;
A spark--gone, at last.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Oooo I liked this one. :) It's like a chant. Or so I read it like one. It's very good. The title is interesting as well. 5

  • 17 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    Loved it, that was so great. Nice vocabulary, also : ) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Alma

    Very mysterious and intriguing poem. It seemed fearful. loved it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Paige

    You definately know how to tame your words...me,not so much. I'm not easily tamed.

    I like this poem, it makes sense using the least amount of words possible...and I like that =)

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