Knives of Darkness

by Felix13   Jun 18, 2007


Every night, in the darkness
I feel your presence.

Like a knife slipping in and out of its sheaf,
I feel you.

Like an assassin's first kill, you make me want more,
And i want you.

Forever dancing in the darkness, warm with blood,
We are together.

I want you,
I feel you,
Together,
And we are one,
Like the knives of darkness.

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  • 17 years ago

    by jasumin amai

    Loved the wording and the way you described everything...it was a really cool poem but I must disagree with tainted over the end, it was perfect!

  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    ...I don't know what to think about this one. Kinda gives this anticlimatic feel...yet...it oddly fits. Totally drawn into it at the beginning but then I lose focus at the end. Your imagery's pretty cool and using the assassin was a nice touch. Still shows something cool with the imagery and word usage. I'm just not a fan of the ending cuz there seems to be something missing though it's a good end anyway. Probably just being picky.
    ~Faith-less

  • 17 years ago

    by Estefania

    Hey great poem keep it up 5/5