Hey great poem keep it up 5/5

...I don't know what to think about this one. Kinda gives this anticlimatic feel...yet...it oddly fits. Totally drawn into it at the beginning but then I lose focus at the end. Your imagery's pretty cool and using the assassin was a nice touch. Still shows something cool with the imagery and word usage. I'm just not a fan of the ending cuz there seems to be something missing though it's a good end anyway. Probably just being picky.
~Faith-less

Loved the wording and the way you described everything...it was a really cool poem but I must disagree with tainted over the end, it was perfect!