Wow that is the best description of pain and wanting wow that was great 5/5 truly depressing maybe u can read one of mine.

Its good...
u made me think...
think of my pain...

Very good poem.
Great flow.
Nice piece of work.
Take care

5/5
-it starts scaring you at night,
when you look up to the moon,
longing for something to end,
dying can never come too soon.- great stanza
This is so powerful poem, you're incredible writer.
Great work!
I'm gonna read some more of yours!

Really good poem. The last stanza really ended the poem nicely, one of the best parts for me : ) Your words were full of meaning and power. Excellent job : )

I really like how you started the poem - it summarizes (sp) the message :) good job! I think everyone can relate to this beautiful poem. I can really feel your emotions in this poem, Flow was good, great vocab once again

A well deserve 5/5!