I Miss You

I am going to be brutally honest...I didn't enjoy this at all. To me it wasn't poetic in the least bit. I felt like it was rather cliche and pretty boring.I definantly would consider doing some revising or something.However,poetry is about you writing something for yourself...so I suppose if you like it...well I guess that is all that matters. Please don't hate me for my honesty.I am just trying to give you some friendly critique.

Brit

God,
I feel like this everyday.
I couldn't have said it better.
This is really good.
-allie

Sometimes we never get those second chances that we so desperately want :(

Nice .. keep it up