Alone..

by Catie   Jun 18, 2007


As tears run down my face,
I'm searching for a trace,
A way to find you,
And the things we use to do.

That's all changed now,
Since you're not around.

How could you leave me here,
To face all of my fears?

I thought you loved me,
But love just never comes around,
When you're in this world...Alone...

it's short...and it sucks, but comments will be very nice

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "As tears run down my face,
    I'm searching for a trace,
    To find you,
    And the things we use to do."

    "To find you"- doesn't really go well with the rest of the stanza, maybe try something like this: "I'm searching for a trace,
    A way to find you,"

    I think that would be better, but thats my opinion, otherwise everything else was wonderful! :)

More Poems By Catie