Comments : Am i allowed?

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Nice, I really like this, you definitly should make it longer if you can, and it would be even better.

    "Tainted and shattered,
    I'm torn apart.
    I should have known,
    From the very start."

    Good flow here, makes it very enjoyable opening stanza.

    Nice second stanza too, can't wait to read more of your poems, take care!