I like it...It is quite catchy and I like that about poems....It got a little boring, to be tottally honest, I dont no exactly but I lost focuse in parts...but the ending bought me back so nice..
Idk, i wouldn't say there is anything that needs to be re done in this poem for it is all good, and it's pretty sweet....i think its just to long and exaggerate in some things....asks to many questions but i like it....