by Ben Jun 18, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Step out onto Penny Avenue, |
by Lover Boii
I love the part of the chocolate dollars melting under her feet. You created a very lonely feel in this poem and it's almost haunting. I love it. |
Hey Ben, |
by Ben
Penny Avenue isabout a girl, whose last name is Penny, i just used the street as a metaphore as to the relationship she and I experience. =) |
Wow, I love this poem sweetheart. |