What sparked this?

Tis sad how some people are huh? the same thing jus happened to me a few weeks back, still broken up about it, but these are great lyrics david, really enjoyed reading it, i give it a 5/5!!! keep them coming

David, Again this was great. You are truely talented with music and these lyrics were strong deep and powerful. I love the emotion you are able to portray with such beauty. Well done on writing this a 5/5 as you truely deserve it. ~Mel

Hey man this was a very good song. Nice flow and structure and a very good chorus... Say man why don't you find a nice beat and do a vocal version on this? Im confident that it would be great ...

Keep writing man since it is in your nature =)

Simply amazing. I like the emotions it in! Flow was smooth and I like the structure of the poem/song.

5/5! all the way.

How poignant. Verily, this was written with much passion and intensity - enough to blow me away.
A tear-jerking write.
I hope you all the best and take care.
Keep on writing!

Debbie (^^,)

Nice song. I like it a lot. It shows well that suffering is something people do but it goes unrecognized and unappreciated.

Thats really good! i mean it. xoxo

Really good

Full of emotions.i liked it.
**harlea

Wow this is deep david I love it

Hey man thats really deep.
the thing is, I can really relate.
You did a beautiful job expressing ur emotion and the flow. I luv u writing , thanx for sharing 5/5