Oh, this was such a great romantic poem with great emotion, i like the way you simply telling a person what they mean to you. the best part of this poem that i really enjoyed was the word neon light and how u use it as a methopher.
honestly this was one of the most sweet poem i ever read in P&Q, keep it up dear.

Absolutely beautiful poem. Full of emotion. I can tell how much that person means to you. I simply love the third stanza. The rhyming was spot on and not over done and the vocab was good. Great job.
Alex

Exceptionally word choice excellent show of raw emtions, the flow was absoultly flawless, and it is well penned. Perfect write, and an excellent read, keep up the good work 5/5

This was a good poem I liked the flow and the words were well placed. The flow was good aand it stayed true to the title good job Plot121