Touchdown and Turnaround ( Don't give up on me )

by Teria   Jun 18, 2007


Touchdown And Turnaround (Don't give up on me)

So far from heaven, yet so close to hell..
Living a life from which I fell
so far away from my beliefs.
But, you.. Oh you're my relief.

I watch you run across the field,
and my entire body yields.
I see you make that touchdown,
and swiftly make your turnaround..

You glance my way, with that smile.
You haven't given up on me in quite a while.
I remember the pain we once went through,
as I tried so hard to stick by you.

I remember everything I did to you,
and how you kept loving me through.
And, I can still see the touchdown,
turnaround; baby, don't give up on me.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I really liked it
    i thought that it was
    cute
    and sweet
    and i love football
    and i liked how u incorporated
    it into the whole poem

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    Cute poem.
    Enjoyed reading it.
    Well done

  • 17 years ago

    by Kurt

    This was a short poem and the message was sweet. Everything clicked well together and it made me happy when I read it. Great write 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by skye16

    B-e-a-utiful