by CHOKE Jun 18, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
She pulls out a pen |
It has an emotional aspect that plays out through the wording. Though it doesn't flow smoothly it does have this appeal to the emotions. It's kinda...dark and sad mingled together. I like the last stanza cuz it's directed to someone about the actions of the other that kinda leads to setting the 'heart free'. |
by sweetiepie18
Well written .... very effective |
Wow i could feel feelings in this one or so it seems i loved the description 5/5 huh i havent gaven you a four yet |