Wow i could feel feelings in this one or so it seems i loved the description 5/5 huh i havent gaven you a four yet

Well written .... very effective

It has an emotional aspect that plays out through the wording. Though it doesn't flow smoothly it does have this appeal to the emotions. It's kinda...dark and sad mingled together. I like the last stanza cuz it's directed to someone about the actions of the other that kinda leads to setting the 'heart free'.
~Faith-less