Hidden Messages

by FountainsOfBlood   Jun 18, 2007


I Can See You All...

I might not be next to you,
I might be 1000 miles away,
But I can see you right through,
Whatever you may say.

I know what you do,
I know what your feeling,
Don't tell me this isn't true,
But we are all healing.

Look at everyone,
Look at what we write,
Our poems are not for fun,
They say we're not alright.

Our poems inner meaning,
Are all a hidden cry,
Given them a screening,
They all have a tearful goodbye.

If you can't see the message,
I am trying to send,
This is my presage:
Re-read the poem till the end...

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  • 17 years ago

    by xXxSurrenderToMyWrathxXx

    You are so right. Most poems are just a cry 4 help! Great work! Try to check out some of my poems!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalee nichole

    I liked this poem alot

  • 17 years ago

    by Mary

    Luv it perfect poem lol <3

  • 17 years ago

    by FountainsOfBlood

    You are on the right lines though, if you expand it through the poems meaning, you should get it.

  • 17 years ago

    by FountainsOfBlood

    Thank you! Yeah, the message of this poem is difficult to work out, but once you get it, it all makes sense. I'm not going to say as it will spoil it! LOL!
    Sarah xx