Hmm..this is a very nice poem, good rhyme scheme and structure. a nice meaning too =]
i didnt get wether it has a hidden message or not, or wether its 'i can see you all', still an awesome write=]
i dont get why no-ones really read it much. 5/5 for sure.
nuf luv xx

Thank you! Yeah, the message of this poem is difficult to work out, but once you get it, it all makes sense. I'm not going to say as it will spoil it! LOL!
Sarah xx

You are on the right lines though, if you expand it through the poems meaning, you should get it.

Luv it perfect poem lol <3

I liked this poem alot

You are so right. Most poems are just a cry 4 help! Great work! Try to check out some of my poems!