*,, Good poem. I can really relate do it because I'm in the same situation right now. Kind of stressful.

One thing I can say that would make this poem better is if you have the same number of lines in each stanza 'cause a couple of yours are different from the rest.

Keep it up && thanks for the comment,,*

Good lyric there!!!

Sometime,its easier to go by than standing up n watching the man u love!

I know it can be hard,
but believe me,its easier to do that,
than to lose your fiancee in a car accident!

There is a million man waiting for you,
dont let go away all those nice person,
that u cant see while u r disperatly waiting for the other guy!

anyways,it sound very nice,and u did write the real feeling about him,n i like it!

btw,thx for your comment!

kly

I frikken love this...

''I wanted to forget you,
And it kills me inside.
I just cant let go,
No matter how much I try.''

^^That was my favourite part of the entire poem, it hit me hard and I found it to be very intense.

I thought the flow was good throughout, although there were one or two times were it seemed a little shaky, to fix this try and eliminate some of the fillers (I, and etc)

Apart from that, this was beautifully written and very moving, a powerful opening with it getting better and better from there.

Awh,
this is exactly how someone would feel.
you have an excellent way of showing emotion.