by Bryan Jun 18, 2007
category :
Life, society /
patriotism
His family gathers, to give their last goodbyes, |
by aDORKable x3
Oh Bryan! This brought tears to my eyes! I totally agree with you hun! This country really needs some straightening up! Keep it up lovee! 5/5!!! |
by skye16
As to describe in one word "deep", but i do say however, one word is not enough. |
by Melpomene
Bryan, Again you have written a poem that speaks of true emotional meanings. Honestly I found this work to be beautiful. Your dedication at the end made this work stand out high as did this whole piece together. I found this to be such a heartfelt emotion capturing piece. One word. Amazing. Well done Bryan keep writing and inspiring people the way you do. Poems like this are why you are on my favorites. ~mel |
Excellent poem very heartfelt great job. |
by Rachel RTVW
This is heartfelt. Recently a young man my sister went to school with since 3rd grade was killed by a roadside bomb in Iraq. A senseless tragedy. Excellent job on the poem! |