Thank you. You again brought my emotions and thoughts right into this poem as so many others have. The rhyming and usage of imagry are very well put.

This poem was so good.the imagery was good and the flow was even better.
and thank you for the comment on mine.
best wishes
and take care.

This was an outstandingly great poem! 5/5

This piece was really good, because it's something I think a lot of people can relate to. I definitely can. I love how you portray emotions, in this piece. Great job. 5/5

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Strong feelings for someone you can't possibly have. Been there. But don't worry I believe that there is always a reason there is always that day, when it comes and you meet that guy you'll spend the rest of your life with. Just remember that without certain mistake or breakups in your life you would have never met that wonderful person. I think everyone has a path and a purpose, just some parts of it are harder than others. Great Write 5/5