Comments : Confusion

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Great poem! You described emotions very well. Atmosphere is excellent and topic of this poem is amazing.
    I tell you "Death is my escape"
    but I'm already dead inside
    This whole world is just too fake-I agree with this line
    I can no longer hide
    ^That is my favorite stanza.
    Well done, 5/5