This is a very well written poem, i really like the turning point of it. you have done a great job. you are a talented writer, keep it up.

a 5/5 from me cause you really deserve it.

Tis poem scared me. I tucked my feet up onto my chair afraid of that ghost! Wow! 5/5

Hmm...some interesting things. I kinda like the imagery cuz...well it's vivid yet vague leaving room for the imagination. Third stanza ended this piece on a strong note and the beginning nicely draws you into it except... There's something about the fourth line of the first stanza that I kinda don't like. Maybe it's the flow. But other than that awesome write.
~Faith-less

Wow..I Really like thye imagery this poem had..The flow was also good...The wording was just right...Overall 5/5...Keep It Up..Your A Good Writter...

Very good but very short i would like to continue reading....lol great job always leave ppl asking for more right?

-laura-

Very well written. I loved the way that the last stanza just blew my mind. Lol. Very short albeit very creepy. Great job!
Alex.

I like the choice of words. very creative. i do believe in ghost and felt like i have seen one lol. great write =]]