by Alvin Laberinto eNigmaa Jun 19, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
A black and white rainbow, |
Soo sad very good write though melikey |
by KayleeDawn
Iiii really lover this poem!!!!!!!! |
by FallenAngel
Well written, but the 'cuz' really cuts the feeling of the poem. Recommend you use proper grammar, i think such a beautiful piece deserves it. 4/5. |