Comments : Black and White Rainbow

  • 17 years ago

    by FallenAngel

    Well written, but the 'cuz' really cuts the feeling of the poem. Recommend you use proper grammar, i think such a beautiful piece deserves it. 4/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by KayleeDawn

    Iiii really lover this poem!!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Soo sad very good write though melikey
    5/5
    laura