I love the rhyme in this poem =] It reads really nice =) Keep it up! xxx

Wowwww! love this one.. the rhythm n rhyme is awesome.. every stanza is deeper than the one b4.. its full ov meaning.. i c no improvement 4 this poem.. =]]
GREAT WORK!
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Great poem just wonderfull..the flow, emotions and the meaningness of the poem was so well put!!...keep up thr gr8 writes
hope to read mroe like this soon
tk care bree
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