by VYXSIN Jun 19, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
Don't you see these boys |
by Robert
This was a very strong poem and I know if you got the reader more into the poem itself instead of making this piece a soap box speech this poem would hold a great deal of power, I think over the years you will see what I mean but anyways nice try Plot121 |
by Lethmelodis
I loved it. Very well wrote. It flows extremely well considering it's a free form (no rhyme), not to mention I like the message its portraying. Good job. |